I am reading the book called “Raise Your Voice” and it was written by Robin Wasserman. Jay felt like his heart was breaking because Terry stopped talking to him, but Jay was still trying to talk to her. He couldn’t write the song without Terry. He needed her; he always thought about her. I really understand how he felt. Terry was depressing. She never thought that she would see his boy friend doing this. If it’s me I will be so upset like Terry too. One day, Jay went to Terry’s room to apologize to her. He was drunk. Terry took him up to the deck. Jay slept on the floor; Terry looked after him all night. I tried to imagine how he went up to her room with unconsciousness and trying to bring his love back. I think Terry still loved him, so she wanted to take care of him. She wouldn’t let him stay alone while he’s getting drunk. Drunken man would do anything because he was in unconsciously situation. Finally, somehow they both came back to each other. It might be because Jay was trying to see her and talk to her for many times, and suddenly last night he came to her room. That might be the reason why she forgave her. If I am Jay and I love Terry so much, I would do like him. I won’t give up easily. I would try to do every single thing that I can do, but I wouldn’t drink to eradicate my pain. They both helping each other wrote the song. Terry would sing and Jay would play guitar together for show. They might get the scholarship.
Inauspicious, her father finally knew that Terry went to the musical school for the whole summer vacation. It was because the school sent them a letter to see their show. His dad was so upset. He would go to see Terry. Let see what would he do, will he get angry when he see her or he would be proud of his daughter? I predict he would do something bad to her. He would take her back home even she has any reason. It’s because he already said that he doesn’t want her to come her since she was at home.
The Door To Time-Chapter 3
17 years ago
3 comments:
I think that you should write about what strategies you used. According to Guiding for Blog, you have to write about strategies. So, you should make good use of guiding for blog. I don't seem that you use guiding for blog.
I could understand your summary.
I did use the strategies. I try to imagine when Jay was trying to talk to Terry which he was in unconscious situation, "imagine and try to picture are the same meaning, isn't it?" I also predict the story when his dad realized that her daughter lied to her.
I think you did use strategies. For example, visualizing what you read--you "tried to imagine" what the character did at one point. It was very nicely done, incorporated into the blog without being obvious.
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