Sunday, September 21, 2008

RAISE YOUR VOICE#5

Terry was studying in the singing class. Her teacher talked to her after class and he showed her DVD that Paul sent it over there which made Terry missed him so much. Paul sent the DVD to the musical school to help terry when she was attending to the school. In the DVD was all about Terry which Paul took her daily life. Terry ran out of the room. I didn’t understand why she was running out of the room for going back to her room and packing all stuff back home. She shouldn’t give up. She must follow her goal. Anyways, Jay saw when Terry was crying and going back to the room, so he followed her. Finally, Jay came in her room and tried to change Terry’s mind that “Why are you here?”, “Why am I here!”, “Why is everyone here!!” Don’t stop your dream. It made you feel comfortable and happy isn’t it? Terry agreed with him. Afterwards, Paul always stayed beside her. If I am Terry, I’ll be so please that someone is staying beside me and giving me a moral support. If you are one of the students there, are you going to change Terry’s mind for not going back home? Or you will just let her go? Everyone is like an enemy for getting the scholarship, but for me, I will help her. Friends and follow your dream is better than being an enemy. It is not exactly a competition, but it is just like who has done in studied the best. Terry did a wonderful job in every class. She helped Jay writing the song.

3 comments:

YUKA said...

I think that your sentence is easy to understand for me, and also you ask some questions to the writter. So, I think it is good.
Anyway, I agree with you that I also help her.

Would you change language? because I can not read Thai.

HARUNA said...

I could understand easily your short summary. While I am reading your blog, I think that it is good idea to use the question in the blog.

Khru Jo Anne said...

You wrote that you did not understand why Terry ran out of the room. What did you do then? Tell what you did to increase your understanding.