Sunday, September 28, 2008

RAISE YOUR VOICE #6

Jay was a kind of shy when he has to show Terry his own song. Terry helped Jay to change some parts of the song. A guy name Kiwi, Terry and Jay’s friend wanted to know a girl named Slone. Terry helped them knowing each other by going out in evening. They get to know each other more. Kiwi thanked to Terry. I think many people have an experience like this too. Like know a new girl or boy by your friends. In that day, Terry’s aunt called Terry to immediately go back to her house. Terry’s dad was coming to see her and if he didn’t see her at Terry’s aunt house, then she would get into trouble. Terry finally went back before her dad arrived; she felt a thrill of fear. My younger brother always did like this too. He liked to hang out with his friend even my dad didn’t allow him to go. He just went out and came back before my dad came back. He sometimes couldn’t arrive home before my dad, so he got a punishment. After Terry's dad went back home, she came back to the musical school. Everyone was studying in the class, but Terry was absent because she was sick. In the class time Jay’s ex-girl friend was upset because she didn’t get the round that she wanted to sing and the teacher said that we have to wait for Terry. She deserved this round because she has tried so hard. Jay’s ex-girl friend came out of the class and cried. Jay walked pass her and asked what was happening. She begged Jay to talk in privacy. They went into piano room and Jay’s ex-girl friend was trying to persuade Jay to come back to her. She kissed him. Frightened, Terry push the door and she saw they were kissing, so she ran away from him. Actually Jay didn't do that, but his ex-girl friend did it. Jay followed her and told his ex-girl friend to stayed away from him. Terry was depressing. Terry didn’t talk with Jay even he came and reconcile. If I am Terry, I will be so sad too because I would hate if my lover does something like this to others. Everyone would feel like me too. Some would forgive, but some won’t. Let see what Jay will do. Will he reconcile her until she get meek or he will no talk to her anymore.

1 comment:

YUKA said...

I think that your summary is easy to understand, but I think you should make a paragraph, or you should make a short paragraph.
When I read your summary, I was hard to read.